Diamond fora core
Crown of T E A R S.
ReleaseMe! from your Devils.
We Wander,
Give me what I desire
We Roam,
Compose me as your song
We Wander Alone.
The song that lasted
AllNightLong.
Should I make a list,
of all the Things I have to do
togettoyou?
I've seen it in your Eyes
R E A D it from his Mind
Like you always read mine.
and my secrets and my Fears
pry out
the shame and tears
then... say it's Ok
when we both know
You L I E.
So...
turn me sideways,
This is what Lady Luck
tie me up,
Looks like.
I'll be the ice Melting inYourcup.
I've seen the sunrise and
You've seen it in My eyes.













Comments
The thing about this poem more than anything is tone. The sheer tone of it makes me love it if not in additon to the constant flow of metaphors.
Excellent.
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The brotherhood of dark writers is on the rise. With pens in hand we will write for all to see.
I've seen it in your Eyes
R E A D it from his Mind
Like you always read mine.
I can relate to that one a lot.
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The brotherhood of dark writers is on the rise. With pens in hand we will write for all to see.
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